Blue_Rubies

Today is a sad song played on a new violin; Mismatched and Ill fitted, Singing of sorrows it cannot compute. A waltz, danced with a forbidden eagerness, forever restrained from ...

Granted, but you'll soon realise they're egoistic jerks and you won't want to hang out with them anyway. I wish my dog could talk.

9/10, Nirvana is awsome . Yes that is in bold, italicised, underlined, and purple. Such is the awesome.

I am super inspired my music, because in my mind, every song has a story to tell. When I'm writing, I listen to whatever music has inspired that scene. It ...

Show, don't tell - It's amazing how much this little tip helps. "Read like butterfly, write like a bee" Philip Pullman Take inspiration from everything around you. Take ideas, twist ...

This is fantastic start to the story. On of the most important parts of writing is to show, and not tell, the reader what is happening. You have done this ...

I love the theme of this poem! I can really connect with it, and it's so simple and beautiful! Just one issue.. the lines Every single voice Is drowned out ...

As mentioned before, the poem starts off rhyming, then all of a sudden stops. This disappoints the reader, as the first stanza has set them up for rhyming, and they ...

I guess it's not really the traditional cryptic riddle - it's more like painting a picture of the scene. The Answer to the riddle: A fire Dragon=flames White wings=ash Raven=charcoal ...

I once got 100% for a ballad that my teacher couldn't make head nor tail of because it had beautiful imagery . In short anything but plot. I have several ...

What if she secretly doesn't know the answer?

Yet another newbie.. :smt119 This place looks like fun!

The rose gold dragon roars, and spills Wings as white as winters chills. A thousand tiny specks of snow Fly undecided, high and low Disappearing one by one Beneath the ...

I believe that this story succeeds where other short stories don't in that it gets to the climax very quickly and the introduction is not too long. The descriptions were ...

I love it! Great use of alliteration and personification there. It may just be a missing apostrophe but some of the lines don't make much sense to me Rattling on ...