BlueTiger

Deleted for plagiarism. -Lumi

This was an incredible effort! I've only just come from the contest description itself so I can see just how hard this must have been to do. If you don't ...

I don't feel I have a lot to contribute here, but I do feel that this is the chapter you could work on the most when it comes to editing. ...

I know this chapter has changed dramatically since this point. It would have ahd to, considering you completely altered the first one, this one would need to change to fit ...

It looks like I'm the first to review on the revised version of this! I'm assuming you didn't repost due to the order in which it would be displayed on ...

I really like this! I figured that I would read and review your story in light of review day and because you're my captain :D I think this was actually ...

These are quite cool, but see if you can change the red font. It's a bit hard for me to read. I'm assuming that the books are dark, and you've ...

This is really cool! I like the photo, although I don't really see how it relates to the novel. Maybe you should have asked the author a bit more about ...

The cover won't attatch as a file upload, so I have to make it cover art instead. Sorry if that makes it diffcult!

Well there are thirteen entries so far so this seems to be quite a popular book! Perhaps I should take a read and then try to make my own cover? ...