BlueSunset

Sorry I didn't mean to put a quote on 'or'.

I think I like my other poem better, but still, this one is fine.

Thanks! :)

Ok, thanks for the review!

Yeah, I didn't mean to make the last poem rhyme.

Thanks a lot!

:D

I know..... It think I'm going to make my next poems longer.

I really want to!!!!!! :D

Yeah, I thought that about that line, too. It's my second poem, so it may not be the best.

Oh.... I might as well, if that is what some people think.

Thank you! Since this was my first poem, I capitalized more, and it was a bit shorter than normal poems are.

Cool. :D

Really? Neat!

Anytime! :D