BlueKangaroo

. PART III: Car Crash Four Hours Earlier – 8:20 AM After Officer Bodi and Officer McIntosh had left with Josh, Lauren, and me, Officer Lakin looked at the four ...

Yes, it did. Every Fifteen Minutes is a nationwide program that dozens of schools participate in every year. My school did it last year, in May 2009. And no, unfortunately, ...

Thanks! It's a dark and difficult topic, one that most people don't like to think about. I get a lot of "(blank stare, awkward shrug) Well, that's depressing!" I'm glad ...

Do you mean that I should post each chapter as a separate segment? I thought about doing that, but I think it would be too confusing for people to have ...

Wow! What a beginning. Everyone else has already mentioned the grammar errors, so I'll just say that this is great! Your descriptions are AMAZINGLY vivid. Well done!

Only 1 review? :( ---- PART II: Grim Reaper 9:00 AM While Josh, Lauren, and I were at the hospital and Patrick, Emily, Andrea, and Michael were waiting for their ...

Beautifully written. There's not much I can say about this except that I'm sorry. I am truly sorry that you were hurt so badly. :( ((Hugs)) to you.

Thanks for the reviews and advice! I had a lot of fun writing this, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) I did some proofreading and editing. ;)

PART I, Chapter 3 The siren emitted a shrill yelp and began to wail. I caught a split-second glimpse of two more ambulances behind us as we merged into traffic ...

PART I, Chapter 2 The drive to the police station was short. In only a few minutes, we were pulling into the huge garage and Officer McIntosh was parking the ...

Three Weeks Later PART I: Simulator and Hospital Tuesday, 8:20 AM "Honestly, this is so stupid." This complaint was punctuated by an eye roll and a sigh. "It's bad to ...

Thanks! By the way, I'm the "character" here and I am a "she." I guess it wasn't clear, but this is a true story about someone that I observed. Thanks ...

Wow. Just....wow. This is amazing. Such a sad situation, and yet one seen all too often. This captivated me from the very beginning, and moved me to tears. Wonderful job!

Teen angst and fake conflict are precisely why I no longer write on so many sites - they have been overrun by cheesy fanfics and poorly written stories. So far ...

This was one of my first writing pieces, and it has since been revised about a million times. :) Since it's a religious story (obviously), it has gotten quite a ...