BlueKangaroo

I'm actually going to Israel for three weeks on a medical mission trip, to work with a group called Shevet Achim in Jerusalem. I leave May 4, so in about ...

. PART III: Car Crash Four Hours Earlier – 8:20 AM After Officer Bodi and Officer McIntosh had left with Josh, Lauren, and me, Officer Lakin looked at the four ...

Yes, it did. Every Fifteen Minutes is a nationwide program that dozens of schools participate in every year. My school did it last year, in May 2009. And no, unfortunately, ...

Thanks! It's a dark and difficult topic, one that most people don't like to think about. I get a lot of "(blank stare, awkward shrug) Well, that's depressing!" I'm glad ...

I'm so, so sorry that things are so difficult for you. :( I admire you for putting this out here for all to read. It feels wrong to critique something ...

Do you mean that I should post each chapter as a separate segment? I thought about doing that, but I think it would be too confusing for people to have ...

Wow. Just.... WOW!! :D This is incredible. The premise is intriguing, an interesting concept. As qtbubblegirl said, it makes you feel very patriotic! Your descriptions are amazingly vivid. This is ...

Wow! What a beginning. Everyone else has already mentioned the grammar errors, so I'll just say that this is great! Your descriptions are AMAZINGLY vivid. Well done!

Everyone else has already covered pretty much everything that I noticed about grammar, word choice, etc. So I'll just say: Wow. :shock: This is really interesting. Your prologue was great; ...

I just found this topic! :D I'm new here, and would REALLY love some reviews on my work. "Every Fifteen Minutes" is a story about the consequences of drunk driving. ...

Only 1 review? :( ---- PART II: Grim Reaper 9:00 AM While Josh, Lauren, and I were at the hospital and Patrick, Emily, Andrea, and Michael were waiting for their ...

You get the essay assignment that I am supposed to be writing instead of hanging out on here..... and a giant chocolate-chip cookie. :D Great thread, by the way. I'm ...

Beautifully written. There's not much I can say about this except that I'm sorry. I am truly sorry that you were hurt so badly. :( ((Hugs)) to you.

9/10. It made me laugh! I love the Raven's idea of a story. :D I think I'll have to find this and read more. ---- "July 23, 1991 – May ...

I am laughing so hard right now! Thank you, I really needed to laugh. I think a lot of these would make me want to read the story just to ...