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Re: The Cherry Code- Chapter One- The Prophecy
Hehe thanks Sakura! GREAT idea about the men and children! I'll fix it right away! When i was writing that bit it didn't sound the way I wanted it to ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: The Cherry Code- Prologue
Yes and no. I was thinking more like a Lord of the Rings story, with the same main objective and the different stages of achieving that objective change slightly in ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: The Cherry Code- Prologue
Dear ziggiefred, Thank you so much! Your review really helped and I hope that the corrections that I have now made help the story to be more gripping. I would ...
Nov 27, 2010