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Re: Destinies Entwined ch.1. The story of Neil
Despite my shorter comment earlier, I believe I will now give some proper criticism. The very first sentence "As a kid is biking down the sidewalk he is late as ...
Oct 16, 2008
Despite my shorter comment earlier, I believe I will now give some proper criticism. The very first sentence "As a kid is biking down the sidewalk he is late as ...
Oct 16, 2008
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