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YWS itself has used it. (Well, technically Nate, so speak to him about it.) You can buy the Young Writers Literary Journal on both Amazon and Lulu (where it was ...

I've moved this to Writers Corner. The Fiction forums are for posting the stories themselves. :wink: Thanks, -Blink

(Since no one else has replied.) This might be helpful to you: But really, that's inaccurate; as long as you're careful, even the most overused things can be done originally. ...

Well, as it stands, it has potential. But I have a few concerns: His older brothers joined the navy and were stationed in Pearl Harbor in 1940 one year before ...

You asked questions; you have that right. January 2010 is a long way from now. If you want to pull it out of the magazine at any point, you have, ...

December's Burns stood out for me, but then I think it's a little dull. What about "December Burns"? You've got a verb in there and it could either mean burns ...

Said's mah idol. I love it. If the reader can't tell how something is said in said said, then the writer needs to reconsider what it is that is said, ...

Hey! I'm actually doing the exact same thing. I'm giving the main character the name of, "the beggar" or "the thief". Haven't decided :wink: . Anyway, Cormac McCarthy is very ...

The candle shone with no shadow. The blood hums in the river. The body steals its own gravestone. Woah, they suck. XD

Thanks for the thoughts, everyone. =] I agree with Music, it sounds a bit Berlin's wall. But! If that's what you were going for. :wink: It's not. xD But who ...

So yeah, I’m not sure what to say about this. As you can imagine, I have a few plot ideas and I'm interested as to see if you’d be interested ...

When it comes down to the bare-bones, all modern work is cliched in one way or another. I'm sorry, but no. No. No. No. No. It's no more clichéd than ...

One thing blink, oh and by the way if it seems like I'm being a whiny little complainer sorry, but have you ever tried to make your own fantasy race ...

GET RID OF THE ELVES. Sorry. I just have a phobia against using mythical creatures that have already been done to death . Make up your own races. Is it ...

I think that you're just more worried about the main character, since he/she is the most important, after all. Just write it; when you edit, you look back and see ...