Blink

I've never kept a NYR. So, that's my first NYR. - By 17th December (16th Birthday), complete my first draft of my first novel. - Lose enough weight to feel ...

My favourite places are outside in the sunshine and curled up next to a roaring fire. But usually I just read in bed. 100% snap. Except if it gets too ...

Hello! I've become fairly bored of giving nitpicks recently, so I'll go into the story. Firstly, I'd like to go over: Showing vs Telling You open with a small description ...

One that tells me a) why they liked/disliked it as a reader, and b) what they think would improve it as a whole. I also like to know about the ...

This sounds like something gloomy you'd hear on the news about the Credit Crunch. Will review.

- Gordon Brown will do something awesome and prevent that annoying David Cameron from getting into power (I hope). - There will be an economic slump, which we will pull ...

Hey! I just wanted to say, that it's a 2:1 ratio on reviews:submissions on YWS. You've posted a few pieces, so it's pushing it a bit, no? As soon as ...

Alright, Commando? Be careful about what you write, including the words you use, and all the rest. For example: Claustrophobic dust completely overwhelmed any living creature residing in its powerful ...

Not much going on for me. Just staying at home and such, watching Christmas specials of various things, and, well, enjoying stuff. it's definitely too warm for Christmas, though. It's ...

Walking

Hey! You gave me a review for something terrible some time back, and I never repaid you for it. :) Nitpicks have been done to death, but for a reason--you ...

These icons rule. Though the background hurts my eyes xD. (In a good way!)

Heya! Woah, I took far too long getting to this. landmark, around here, Nitch the first comma. Be sure to proofread--you'll get a lot more indepth reviews if you read ...

'Allo! I'm going to go with grammar first: Orson Welles , [comma] but me? This just adds a little emphasis, and makes the reader slow down, thinking. When the shadows ...

Heya ^ ^ Just a quick point: I've noticed that you've posted two pieces of your own work. YWS does ask that you do two reviews for every one that ...