Blink

Alrighty =P Anne walked briskly along the cobbled streets, holding her thin cloak tightly against her as protection against the biting October wind. I don't like this--not the end part, ...

It looks like all of the UK's hits are floating on a London-sphere. :)

Ollay. Iway alwaysway indfay itway ifficultday otay eakspay inway igpay atinlay, utbay ymay ienfray ancay oday itway eallyray ellway. Iway eednay away ifelay. :D

Uoyay orebay. :)

Hullo. ^^ Why must you be so far away? where stars and sky is all we share. Sort this out: get rid of that question mark and replace the full ...

Hello, Castles. Thought I'd started reviewing these, for you. They looked like smouldering tea, pools of light flitting inside the liquid brown. There is an unusual viewpoint change in this. ...

A critique on... would be awesome. Also, feel free to drop in something you'd like reviewed, so I can pay you back :)

Heya ^^ The sun was starting to rise as I shuddered awake with a massive headache that violently shook my brain. Woah, idea overload. Split this up: "As a headache ...

Etlay usway eakspay inway igpay atinlay! Ifway ouyay ancay, ofway oursecay. (... if you have no idea what that says, just go here .)

For a story more about a character's life (Saturday, by Ian McEwan, for example), present tense works brilliantly since it brings the reader into the story and portrays the story ...

Well, we can't say a lot without knowing any of the story. :wink:

Well done, Jiggity!

Hey :) I thought I'd clear a few things up, first; remember that an archetype is not the same as a cliché. Archetypes are the fundamental basis of all stories--a ...

Hey :) When you write an essay, how do you start it? Do you put, "In this essay..."? Because it's dull and patronising, just like, when writing fiction, you should ...

I SHALL OBEY - Not noisy, but some sort of tune. Music, or whatever. I can't write in silence anymore, not now I'm in secondary school. - Carry a pen/bit ...