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It's back ^.^ learnt as Rasoon and Jaffe His name, or the wording of the sentence, made me think it said "learnt as soon and". I'd just swap around the ...

I personally see viewpoint change in first person a way of cheating. In a way, I suppose it is in fact the same as third person, but remember that by ...

I've returned =) . Right, I find that although the flow is lovely, I'm going to contradict myself. We read "about something" over and over again, right through until the ...

Hey Dem, here by request :). Hmm... YWS just ate my review. Let's try again. Anyway, because I'm going to be of little use here, I'll go ahead and look ...

Just don't look back, once you've started, that is. Otherwise you'll insist on finding fault and get all worked up.

Au contraire, Nate, au contraire! Banushmas.

'Allo, Rosey :) The MC has a rare breed of magic that allows her to sense emotions around her, including Nature's. This seems to me like something very conveniently used ...

Firstly, you've posted three poems according to your portfolio, and have only reviewed twice. Please correct that, and get out to review! It's more a case of paying to back ...

Why, hello there =). He smells like broken windows and rain puddles. I like the imagery at the end, but what does a broken window smell like? Glass? What does ...

200397 seems to have got a lot of the grammar feedback, so I'll just skip forward into the story and I think the rest can be sorted out with a ...

First off, welcome to YWS! Why don't you go ahead and introduce yourself over in the community area? This thread is a little empty :) But, mostly because it's such ...

Oh, wow, thanks Nate!

Wow, thanks Demeter! Is there anything you'd like reviewed in return? If you don't tell me, I'll just storm your portfolio anyway :wink: I might lengthen it out before submitting ...

Burnt Sausages ... is gone! For submission to the journal :) .

The middle. I am forever worrying about pacing, plot lines...