Blink

You've had like, no crits. Now that will not do. =) That was not all they would do to him, especially since he was so small, and the renegades were ...

Well, thanks everyone. Moral of the story: don't try and mix random stuff and hope it works. :) But thanks for the reviews! Blinky

Ahem. I insist on being first reviewer. And by the way, I don't just sit at the home page refreshing until the next instalment comes up. Honest. The hall echoed ...

Thanks you two. =) Entry Turns Two I am actually thinking about taking this dream/nightmare I had last night a bit further. But it'd be a different story, and two ...

Hey Clo. Repaying the favour =) The mountains were too squat Too squat for what? I've noticed a few instances throughout in which you show a word that could make ...

Haha, thanks. Those were my worries too. The girl was sort of "people", representing a kind of dystopian society, then she gets on to the swing, which represents time. I ...

It used to look like a pile of poop. But maybe that's just my immature mind at work. :wink:

This was... interesting to write. I know what I meant to say by it, but what do you think of it? I'm in too much of a trance. Would like ...

I demand a war on this. =)

Bananas don't like you.

Hey ^_^ I tend not to come over here very often--Romance, that is. But I'll see what I can say. I remember it like it was yesterday. This is a ...

Entry the First I rule. It's that simple. Not only have I managed to find excuses for restarting my novel so many times that you would need to by another ...

Hello ^^ I have no idea what nitpicks everyone else has pointed out - ignore any I repeat - other than these: The windowsill protruded far from the wall and ...

Yo, Pandapez! It was a beautiful day. The sky was the palest of blues, with not a cloud in sight. All throughout the market, people were in unusually high spirits. ...

Hello ^^ You sound interesting; post something and let me review it. =) Just drop me a line and I'd be happy to have a look. You can call me ...