Blink

Well, usually men like stories with blood and explosions and sex. Girls like girly things like pink and love stories and unicorns. Actually, a unicorn exploding wouldn't be a bad ...

We all know that if we try to write, we'll be distracted by the internet. It's there. Calling. So who ya gonna call? [s]Ghostbusters![/s] LeechBlock! It's a very handy tool. ...

Alrighty ^_^ Dark rain was falling thickly upon the dank streets, How does "dark rain" "fall quickly"? And what makes the street "dank"? Get rid of all the adjectives and ...

In fact, if recent high physics has demonstrated anything, it's precisely that the universe doesn't necessarily have a beginning (or end). We know that life begins and ends, but what ...

Mars! Yummyness. Cheese or cheesy chips?

Hello. ^_^ "Who really even likes the water?" The "really even" part is a little annoying and difficult to read for a first line. I'd get rid of "really", to ...

The links to the others are in my signature and ^ up there. =) Eoghan and the story are both in need of a new name--just read it however you ...

Maybe, the six day thing will show, although I'm sure it took far longer to edit. If it didn't, and it's good, like, woooah. I'll buy this probably, though I ...

I haven't debated in ages. But I like having theological debates with my friends :) Nate--I didn't really mean that God would exempt other things from making sense, I meant ...

That can be just as dangerous as posting your work. I did that, and I got cut down so far-- I had been about to work on my story again ...

In 2007, I was churning out endless piles of junk. In 2008, it gradually became readable, and I'm now feeling alright with it. It's not great, but improvement happens--reviews really ...

It makes me shiver. I mean, are these people blind to clichés and, well, annoyance? The "good" and "evil" are so black and white. And why does Merlin look like ...

Hello there. :) Just so you know, 2-3000 words is fairly typical here, so don't worry about this length. And remember, if you change the title, do tell us! Otherwise ...

Hello there. :) Just so you know, 2-3000 words is fairly typical here, so don't worry about this length. And remember, if you change the title, do tell us! Otherwise ...

I abominate it.