Blink

Ugh. YWS just ate my review. Sorry about that. But, to summarise, this was fantastic! I really enjoyed reading it; the pace was great and the word choices definitely worked. ...

Wouldn't it be nice to be so popular? :wink:

Hah, thanks. I do like the mood idea. That could work quite nicely. Thank you again. :D

His hat's really big.

Thanks for the reviews, guys. JosephDean: Thanks. As far as I am aware, you can user either form of punctuation for dialogue... but thanks for your input. =) Evi: I ...

The boy smiles something that would better be affixed upon a rotting corpse, but it doesn’t matter, because he can’t see it. ‘Let me out.’ The boy is swollen in ...

It might be cool to use the same names, and the reader will be trying to work out who's who. Of course, the simpler method would be to simply change ...

Ooh, lucid dreaming! I love that! Although, sadly, I've only ever done it once. :( Wanna fall asleep again , he thought, Yeah, that first bit doesn't need to be ...

Hello, I'll bump this thread and review it. :) some of whom refused to let them wear anything other than baggy shirts, jeans and battered boots. Can these poor people ...

Morton The colours were fading from Gondor. Morton sat on the Pelennor fields, and he sat quietly with his eyes staring at Minas Tirith. Between a rock, he fidgeted, wondering ...

I have a folder at school called Random Junk. It features stuff I write with my friend. And he wrote the weirdest thing I have ever read: There are six ...

Hello, there. =) I'll skip grammar nitpicks and focus on the story itself. The hostage felt itself being sucked out and it fought tenaciously, clinging to the walls in defiance. ...

Kick start I am criticizing? O no I'm not. I can prove it, I am a VERY change person. God did that for me. I just want everyone else to ...

Haha, I just had to open this thread to see what's the stupidest thing Blinky's ever done. Anywayz. I don't do stupid stuff. :P You're evil. XD

The way humans do life is through selfish desires, pleasing the self and not caring for others But for some people, it's selfish to care for others. They want to ...