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Re: Are you afraid of the mods?
It's just... the fangs...
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: Little Redbreast {2}
Hey! I was super excited when I saw I had a review. :D Thanks for the great advice! Anyway, Blink, I really do enjoy this story and I think it’s ...
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: Shattered Hope
Hello. =] I. NITPICKS As a general note, remember that grammar in poetry is no different to that of prose; that is to say, only put capital letters at the ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: Little Redbreast {2}
The moon, dazed, drops bitterly into its grave. A golden globe emerges behind the horizon like a dying comrade suddenly springing back to life. Shadows beg at the roots of ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: Shattered dreams (fiction)
Hey, Sarah! Welcome to YWS! Why not introduce yourself in the welcome area? =] I will review this, but please bear in mind the 2:1 review:submission ratio in the YWS ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: Ghosts
Hey Mars! Blinkster here. =] familiar sounds of the intensive care unit buzzing in my ears, concentrating so I could differentiate between them. The way that you've written this makes ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: YWS New Automatic Feature
I think a long line of chimps with typewriters would work better. :D
Apr 23, 2009 -
Re: ForEver, ForNever, ForAlways (Prologue)
Hey! I'm so sorry about the time it's taken me to get back to you. I hope the review is still helpful to you. I’ll never forget you a nd ...
Apr 22, 2009 -
Re: Ouroboros of Heaven
Hello. This looked lonely so I thought I'd come give it some company. Ok, I won't lie--this confused me a lot. It felt to me like a long list of ...
Apr 22, 2009 -
Re: Post a Pic of Your Pet!
He terrifies me:
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: Little Redbreast {1}
Thanks for that. =) I've been continuing with this but I've had loads of stuff to do so I haven't done much more. I'll be picking the pace up again ...
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: Ban Gay Marriage
Same-sex marriages should not be called a marriage in law because the tax code should not apply to those couples incapable of producing children. Adoption, suros - artificial... whatever, the ...
Apr 19, 2009 -
Re: How Have you Changed YWS?
I have done some things, but they're mostly bad. Or good. Depends how you look at it. xD Probably very very bad.
Apr 19, 2009 -
Re: 65% of YWSers Have Kids
lol. We're all secretly middle-aged men with Santa Claus beards, aren't we? Feeling random, I am.
Apr 19, 2009 -
Re: Two New Additions to Big Brother!
And here we bid farewell to Big Brother as we know it... ... because it's looking good now! Congrats!
Apr 19, 2009
