Blink

Heya! I'm so sorry about how long it has taken to get to this. I've done so many exams and hikes and stuff. But hopefully, this will still be helpful ...

Before long, you will all be tea-addicts. :P I smell crumpets. =]

Hey, magnus. =) I have a little spare time, so here we go. The first thing I noticed was that you seem to be overdosing on adjectives and adverbs, when ...

... and so I leave a note in all your guestbooks. ^_^ Thanks, anyway. I think the general consensus is that it was confusing, yah? I agree completely. I think ...

Hello. =] I'll keep this brief because I'm supposed to be working. ^_^ A snowy winter plain lay under the starry night sky. Bright stars seemed dwarfed by the more ...

Merry Mourners [flashback] Your son? Six this morning, thereabouts. Smashed by a hammer. She’s in custody, your wife. Speak to her if you want. No? I really am sorry, sir. ...

Hey! I'm actually doing the exact same thing. I'm giving the main character the name of, "the beggar" or "the thief". Haven't decided :wink: . Anyway, Cormac McCarthy is very ...

Heya Demi! Don't think I've read anything of yours in a very, very long time. I need my occasional dose of insanity, yah? (This won't be much of a critique ...

Now, I'm feeling ruthless. Remember that YWS has a 2:1 review to submission ratio, so please, do some reviews. If you need any help there, just drop me a line. ...

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Because I'm scared of what the dwarves and Demi will do if I don't. I found a buhg. Heh. Chat killed meh. Waterstones' rape: OMGAZ exciting pictures. Worth the wait.

Congrats! :D =P You are one insane reviewing machine.

'Allo, Blinkster here for critiquing. =) I made her swear not to use it... but who can be sure? MY AWESOME SISTER! Rain pelted my face as... I don't know ...

Nate! You're one year closer to that all important age of taking up knitting! Congrats! :D

6/10 I think there are too many ideas that don't really connect, and it feels more like an info dump at some points, really. It felt like this: crowd, sky, ...