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Aqua Marine. Hello. ^^ Couple of things: remember that capital letters at the start of every line is actually not how it should be done. =) It follows the same ...

Ooh, congrats! =]

Hey. Let me have a look at this for you. ^^ my halting breath quickly made the small enclosed space stifling. While I like the opening paragraph, this stands out ...

Tammy. Nuuuuuuu. You're slaughtering grammar, and not in a good way. You see, sometimes people will avoid the strict rules - Cormac McCarthy doesn't use dialogue marks, will avoid things ...

Note: Part two. Sorry it's taken so long. I've only just managed to get back into it, after exams which are finally dead. ^^ Again, I would love to hear ...

If only it hadn't been his death that gave him that comeback.

--Christine, welcome to YWS! Well, it's great you've come here to review someone else's work! To do so, go to the Writing forums (up there in the menu bar), pick ...

Demilvishatberrysundae-- Be grateful that you haven't read many poems by me. They'll seriously mess with your head. XD Anyhow, thank you for the critique! I'm glad you liked it. =] ...

Thanks, both of you! I really appreciate it. I've given it a little edited thought, and I think it's much better. =) I think it's because they is plural, I ...

Looks like I've found a new home page. ^_^

Note: I'm quite new to poetry; what do you think this is about, really? I would love some advice. =) Thanks. * At Tallgrass House the heather wrapped together. Sisters ...

Wink?

Hello. Blinkster here. Everyone knows the saying "It feels so right when it's wrong." But what about "It feels so wrong when it's right?" They are the same thing. I ...

Mars, you have three heads!

Said's mah idol. I love it. If the reader can't tell how something is said in said said, then the writer needs to reconsider what it is that is said, ...