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Re: Snowflake Garden
Hello! Just a quick comment before I start - it's not necessary to capitalise the first letter of every line in poetry. Treat poetry in the same way as prose. ...
Dec 19, 2009 -
Re: Photography: The Blink Modern
Wow, thanks, guys (and girls (and Maya))! It was a cat, but I guess that was quite an experimental photo. In fact, they all were, heh. The fountain's actually from ...
Dec 16, 2009 -
Re: Criminal rights
You're being very, very vague. When you say "caught on tape" - what exactly are you implying? Did they steal a chocolate bar? Or murder 7000 people? Both are very ...
Dec 14, 2009 -
Re: The Black Series: Book 1.
*locked* Please only use the fiction forums for posting the actual works themselves. If you post them in the main literary forums, post them in chapters, and if you post ...
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: Photography: The Blink Modern
And so I've started getting into photography recently, particularly since the purchase of a fairly okay camera came our way a few months ago. :P I'll post some of my ...
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: The YWS 2009 Yearbook
Woohoo! So, erm, where to begin? Well, I'm still here after nearly two years. When I first joined I couldn't tell whether it was just out of curiosity, excitement, a ...
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: Lulu book binding/self publishing
YWS itself has used it. (Well, technically Nate, so speak to him about it.) You can buy the Young Writers Literary Journal on both Amazon and Lulu (where it was ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: What is a sentence fragment?
You coming? ^ That sentence has no verb. "You" is the subject, but the "ing" ending on "come" means it's not a verb. "Coming" is a verb - however, it's ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: Variations on a Hospital Bed
Hey, Mark! Let me just... do some reviewing for you. Purple Prose You might have heard about this before - at some parts, you have real trouble with bloating up ...
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: Featured Member December 2009: Kamas
Go Kamas!
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: Big changes to topics
Wow, that's awesome! I love the new topic images. Thank you! :P
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Random YWS Browser Stats
"Google predominates the market, obviously." XD I love it when they try to know what they're talking about, but just don't. That said, Google Chrome is awesome! It's so much ...
Nov 27, 2009 -
Re: Help me
Hello. =D I thought that the repetition in this was rather effective in some parts, and the rhetorical questions gave an almost mystery, confusion into the piece. But overall, these ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: Mary Sue or Anti-Sue?
Definitely the anti-sue - they're more interesting, and if the author does it well, the reader can get to like any character. It's all about how people look at the ...
Nov 14, 2009 -
Re: As guy is to gal, Bloke is to ??
Blokess.
Nov 13, 2009
