Blink

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Wow, thanks guys! I really appreciate the advice. I need to make the meaning clearer, definitely, and I'll just have a play around with the word order, heh. As always, ...

Hey, Spiral! I must say, you're rhyming was rather nice. It wasn't too forced, and it came across as subtle and effective. Inevitable, it didn't distract at all. So well ...

Hey fell! You have some lovely imagery in here! Or at least, I really think it could be. See, imagery, while it can sound fantastic, unless connected to something (can ...

Hey there! I agree with everyone else - to have such an interesting topic watered down so much is a bit of a disappointment. The rhyme scheme really constricts you ...

Hey Howler! Welcome to YWS! This is a lovely start - the stanzas flower well and there were no choppy, awkward moments that completely distracted the reader. So well done. ...

mademoiselle, her villanelle scratched into the poster reading of the lines he donned her yesterday. the man whose shoes she shines, and a curtsy to him indeed, writing that noun ...

Hey, July! Welcome to YWS. =D This poem had a nice flow to it. The rhyming scheme was soft and didn't feel too forced (with a couple of exceptions - ...

What's this? A new poem? =P Actually, I got the same impression as Conrad - it felt like an 17/1800s Pride and Prejudice-style ball, and all the dialogue made it ...

Give this a title! Anything! Right now! The truth is, even it's something lame and generic, you're more likely to get people reading if there's a title. And it gives ...

Hey! =) I'm afraid to say that I don't like this is very much. You have some goods ideas in here and I like how you didn't rely on grammar ...

Hey, Train. For once, we have an innovative approach to an overused theme. I commend you on that - the amount of angsty and whiny poems about sadness or depression ...

Very pretty. =D Not bad, but I feel there's quite a bit lacking. I'm worried about the forced rhyming that seems to have come out a lot here. One some ...

Well, here we go. =D

I don't understand why they aren't just called "Chapter One" - that said, half of those are probably mine. =D