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Hey Rasca! This is all very bloated. I find you're using phrases that really don't need to be there, and bulking it up with adjectives that just don't work. It's ...

Hey! Let's take a look... Before I begin, let me just say that I loved the flow that this seemed to have, and how it seemed random but still sort ...

Hey Bug! Just a quick dialogue not: your grammar's all off in that department, and it was quite distracting as I read it. There's a wonderful little article by Snoink ...

I actually really love this as it is. It seems to be a very unique style - you must have had a lot of patience to do all those leaves. ...

Hey! I see you wrote this a while ago, but I hope you'll still find my comments useful. I love the idea for the poem! The First World War has ...

Erm, Matt. (I think it's when I go on it from my school, actually, but I don't actually know. =P) That is a pretty insane map, lol.

The best I can give you is to not intend to make the scene sad. If you do, it'll be obvious and feel fake - you need to make the ...

RSVP! (Which makes no sense!)

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! You might want to go and review some other people's work, too, because then you're more likely to a response. That said, here we go: ...

Heh, I love how warm and friendly this poem is! The trouble is that I thought it was a bit too soft. Don't kill me, but I definitely think this ...

Guys (and girls), could we keep this topic to just reviews, please? It'd be better if you could continue conversations through PM. Thanks. =)

So, I'm basically becoming more and more average everyday. Well, thanks for that.

What Rosey and Demi said. ^^ But if I could just add - I'd recommend doing only one at a time, but I'm sure it'd be perfectly acceptable to maybe ...

Thanks. I think you can get through to it from the Red Cross website, but the text equivalent in the UK is to the DEC (Disasters Emergency Committee) for £5. ...

Well, the CERN website may be of help. Under the research section, they have tonnes of information - I haven't found anything specific, but have a good rummage and you ...