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Thanks! Yep, harsh=good :) :smt102

Hi again! myself in the mirror, psyching myself Repetition here=bad. than dad Capitalise the first‘d’. In fact I noticed this error a few times. A year on I'm sure you've ...

Thanks for replying! I use too many exclamation marks too! I can't stop! I hope to see you about! :smt102 (my iconic smilie)

Eragon/Eldest/Paolini=Bad. That is all.

Hey once again! As I said before, the flashbacks are working brilliantly. I'm just loving the way you have some narrative, then a recollection of the past to add along ...

Hey Alainna, This was a lovely piece, and already I can see your writing improving. The flashback is working very well, a great build up. At the moment though, I ...

Hello again! There was far less to say here, and in terms of character development I think the pacing is just right, but again, I think a dramatic opening would ...

Hi Alainna! I’m going to try and get through all of Lyla, it looks like a good story and I need something to read. So far, this isn’t bad and ...

So, here is my complimentary introduction... I like writing fantasy mostly, but I would love to improve as a poet. Somehow it seems a bit beyond me though :? Anyhow, ...