Blink

Ye I agree, the plot is easy to do, but the fact that he denies any form of relation to other stories just annoys me :)

Thanks for the review! I agree, but right now I think if I rewrite it I will just be back where I was before, draft after draft... :)

Hi Rowan! I'm into fantasy too--if you want me to check out anything of yours just say the word! You can call me Blink, or... Mark if you want :) ...

Well, grammar has been pretty much saturated, so I will give my thoughts on the story... It’s my best friend because it’s mine. I tell you what make this a ...

Thanks both of you, I suddenly enjoy writing poetry :)

Thanks, all critiques appreciated: Chapter One: Of a Blind Man EDIT: This has been taken down for shredding. Thank you to all those who helped me see past that pathetic ...

Well, most publishers will not accept, or be very hesitant about taking work that can be found online so before you send it to them, remove it from the internet. ...

Blue Peter ?

Oh right, no problem them :)

Heya! Firstly, in case you didn't know there's no need to put a capital letter at the start of a new line, only, as with prose, at the start of ...

Hey! 1) This one's very nice, but a little blurry so I can't see it all. 2) The whole thing! Right, now it looks a lot better. What's it made ...

Hey again, Who’s all going? "Who is all going?" sounds awkward, and doesn't make sense even in chat. How about just: "Who's going?" Late morning, I logged into MSN, conversation ...

This is really nice, I love messing around with Gimp and especially things like this :) The houses are a little blurry, and to be honest I don't know if ...

I agree... we are destroying the world.

The Book Thief! Lord of the Ringa goes without saying. Oh, and anything by George Orwell, or Ian McEwan.