Blink

Thanks, all critiques appreciated: Chapter One: Of a Blind Man EDIT: This has been taken down for shredding. Thank you to all those who helped me see past that pathetic ...

[s]A Note: This is a start for my novel, a completely different narrative style. It's one of those things that I look back at and think... this is really bad. ...

--NB: Thanks for reading! I'm now in dire need for help on this. I stink at first chapters, and I have a great tendency to overdo them--I know this is ...

NB: Thanks for reading, and such and such. (Thank-you-critiques to all.) This took next to forever, but that was for my laziness. I should have written this a lot earlier ...

NB: Just, er, wondered what you thought? I still don't like this guy's name, but oh well. Thanks to all (and thank you crits to all who review)! Chapter One ...

Right now, I'm not giving you the chapters that I'm writing--this is actually the first half of Chapter Three. Chapter One -- Chapter Two -- Chapter Three Chapter Four The ...

This was... interesting to write. I know what I meant to say by it, but what do you think of it? I'm in too much of a trance. Would like ...

The links to the others are in my signature and ^ up there. =) Eoghan and the story are both in need of a new name--just read it however you ...

Dear God, See the midnight. It melts behind Berlin with the carrier-slaves, drawing dark seas that roll overhead and extinguish the stars. Dawn will break soon; I can see it ...