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Hey, thanks for the review. This was more based on humor, but I still like spicy. I guess it sorta tastes fruity in a way? I don't know, but thanks, ...

I dedicate this poem to all those spicy foods out there. Oh, sweet sweet spicy, how my tongue tingles with your touch, my mouth waters with a glance, I could ...

Ha, I liked it. Is it about, like, this guy you love but hes confusing you by reacting different each day? Yeah, I'm pretty sure that's it. Anyways, I liked ...

Hey, I liked it. Sort of dark and yet beautiful in the same way. I liked this stanza a lot: "Her face was old and worn but she was young. ...

rabbit

If I had to rate this out of 10, I'd probably give it like a 6.5 or something a bit higher. I rated it what it is because I think ...

Thanks for the welcome! Here's some answers: Since 2nd grade (about 5 or six years, I guess) Pizza Jerboa (look it up in google images) Red Anything else to answer, ...

Yeah, I remember you from the chat. And yeah, I know the chat isn't all of it, but I go on when I'm bored. It's time waster for me. I ...

And to Isha, thanks for the criticism! I know it sounds odd for me to be thankful for it, but I become better at things when I get criticized. Yeah, ...

Thanks for the review, Mist! Yeah, I will work on making my writing smoother. Thanks!

Glen (Do names count as words? lol)

Hey, nice job. I liked it because it was sort of mysterious, with the way it was written. I also liked the way you wrote out what she was thinking, ...

Thanks so much! It feels good to know that my first piece of writing I shared is liked! Yeah, I like the Mickey Mouse cartoon as well, I like vintage ...

I have a request, that I hope you can review this short story for me: It isn't very long at all, but it sort of has a meaning to it, ...