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Thanks for the reviews. I'll edit it when I got the time... polishing chapter 2. I'll notice for the "update" for the story when I post it.

Hello. Let`s see what you have here. The day had started out cool with a cloudy sky. Things had gotten difficult after noon and there was simply no easy way ...

Its fantasy. It might not seem like a fantasy work, but it will develop as one... You`ll see. I like to keep my readers in suspense. :)) *giggles*

Thanks for the reviews... To Lava - the repetition of the word "hair" is intentionally put there. As you might have noticed the character has a tendency to repeat himself ...

Ok. My first work on YWS. Hope you like it and don't be shy on criticism. Go for it. I need all the help I can get Prologue How sweet ...

Hi. Well i`m not much of a teacher, but i can help you with some stuff if you would like to.

My native language is Romanian.... :D

Salve. First, before I start cutting and slicing up (in a good way of course), I have to tell you that I only want to help. And also feel free ...

Hi... First of all I really like your story, but it lacks somethings and those somethings are descriptions. I was running so fast you couldn’t even imagine. Never write "you ...

My first review. I kinda checked around to see how it`s done and hopefully I`ll get you a helpful review. Muse planted her hands on her hips. Was the arrow ...

Well I like to skate... (well i like it when i`m not breaking legs and arms), I`m playing guitar as well - still an amateur at this thing, but learning. ...

Hi, people! My name is Andreea or as my friends call me - Dante. Trying to improve my writing skills so I`m quite happy that I found a site like ...