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  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Wanted To Live!

    Hi. thanks for the review. "I was hooked after the first paragraph. Unfortunately, for me it felt like the story started out so strong, then slowly let go of the ...

    Oct 14, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Wanted To Live!

    Ok, I will look through it & see what I can change. Thanks

    Jul 23, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Wanted To Live!

    Thank you soo for the review. It would be amazing if my story helps people! Also the bullying I experienced wasnt actually this severe but Im glad you think the ...

    Jul 23, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Wanted To Live!

    Ok. Thanks!

    Jul 23, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Wanted To Live!

    I%u2019m really happy you liked my story & you were able to relate to the main character. Im also glad to know you fought back & overcame the bullying you ...

    Jul 23, 2020
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    Jul 22, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Wanted To Live!

    I don%u2019t know what%u2019s up with my comment %uD83D%uDE05 but wherever there%u2019s a %u201C I%u2019m%u201D I meant %u201CI am%u201D

    Jul 22, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Wanted To Live!

    Hi! Thank you so for reviewing my work. To be completely honest, the bullying I experienced wasn%u2019t actually this severe. I%u2019m not sure if this story is that realistic but ...

    Jul 22, 2020


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