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  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Untold

    Hi. I love your story, it’s extremely realistic & relatable. I like how the main character connected his thoughts to the things he saw on his way home. I think ...

    Jul 22, 2020
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: "You know. Don't you?"

    Hi! I really like the story overall & i like the conclusion the main character came to in the end. However there are a few grammar mistakes: 1) “ I ...

    Jul 21, 2020
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: I had the ‘know it all’ syndrome.

    Hi! I will try my best to review this. Positives: 1)The grammar is quite good 2)The message is amazing 3) I like the title Negatives: 1)I felt like your story ...

    Jul 19, 2020


Who overcomes by force, hath overcome but half his foe.
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