Blackrose

O.k. So this is only the begin part of my book and there isn't any fantasy in it yet, but I find it so hard to start of a decent ...

Thank you to everyone who reviewed my beginning piece. I completely rewrote it and added a hold load of description. I hope this is much better, please tell me if ...

This chapter sort of continues from chapter one so you might want to read that first, or at least skim through it. A loud knock at the door made Leila's ...

Chapter Three: After a short discussion, Leila was persuaded into letting Lucy come with her to the woods. The girls decided to go later that day at eleven o'clock, when ...

This is chapter four. Hope you like it and please review it!! The grounds were deserted. To quiet for anyones liking. The girls had crept through the corridors, making only ...