Black_Panther

Hey thanks, I love describing the jungle and other plants and animals. This was my first poem that I ever wrote, it took me about two days in my class, ...

Thanks yeah my grammar and my speeling are the things that get me most. Ill fix all those mistakes that you pointed out:) I have been working on this story ...

~*Chapter 1*~ You know how it goes ‘I have good news and bad news’ well out here its ‘I get rewards or I get consequences.’ One word that’s all it ...

Hey thanks :) About the spacing i changed that on my story on the computer after someone told me about it :) but thanks for your reply.

Hello Hyun, thanks i can understand about what your saying, like where the cheetahs live. What Griffenkeeper pointed out was that i put a real place mixed with a fantasy ...

Hey! :) I love your story so far :) I very much want to continue reason to see what happens next!!! As I was reading I noticed that your sentences ...

As he walks away, Zuni hears Sumon grumbling to Layla about ticks and his coat. “Kachi, Kachi where are you? Jamiel is here and he brings great news,” Zuni rounds ...

hah yeah :) ill PM u when i post the 2nd part of my prologue, the second part is a lot longer but it has more action so to speak ...

hey thanks yeah i nocticed that too after i posted but i fixed it on my computer :)

Hey i agree with you, since that i am a first time writer and all. i will change most of the sentences that you pointed out because i liked the ...

Hey thanks for pointing that out I totally agree with you about the sentences, I thought hard when I first wrote them I was questioning them too... I will post ...

The New Dynasty Prologue The dawn of a new day begins with a single strand of light that slips delicately across the desert sand of the Sahara Desert. At first ...

i loved the way you arranged the words, ok maybe not that, well i dont know... all that i know is that i really liked it :) its better then ...

Hey thanks you were right the tital did just come to me :) i think that im going to tital this story The New Dynasty, it came to me when ...

Hey sorry about the small errors i was typing too fast cause i was about to leave. other than that i thoght that i did well for my first time ...