BlackMoonWhiteSky

I'd take a bat to it. What would you do if someone told you you were going to die?

And as for you being "boring," I very much doubt that, sir, since, judging from your reply, you seem to be a very interesting person :P What do I like ...

school

8/10 I would certainly want to read to find out what happened to cause the plane to crash, I think it would be a bit more interesting if you alluded ...

You know you're a writer when... -You hate using a your friend's keyboard because the wrong keys are worn down. -You use their keyboard anyway because the idea is just ...

I put other because I'm working on multiple short stories, novels, and poems right now.

Wow, where to start... I think I like you, not, as you've stated, that you care one way or the other. Your ranting has just brought up several things that ...

Thank you all for your suggestions, they are much appreciated. I will be editing it soon.

Every Halloween night, when darkness falls, old things come alive. Old magics and old spirits awaken and step out upon the world they have not seen for a year. Cemeteries ...

Sleeping Valor: ACC stands for Austin Community Collage, they have multiple locations but I'm taking online courses so I'm not technically tied to a location. Most of my birthday and ...

You know you're a writer when... -The most worn-out book you have is a dictionary. -You treat a certain pencil like it's your best friend. -You "hear" your characters commenting ...

Agreed. I haven't read the second one either(Sad face), my dad refuses to buy hardbacks and, as I have yet to get a job, (hey, I going to ACC over ...

Very interesting, good flow, flow is very important, though the bit after the second break could use some tweaking. There are a few mistakes after the second break, like here: ...

I like it, the beginning really grabs you, but...on to reviewing. The beginning flows well but once you get to "When I finally finished...", you know, out of his mind ...

Well, I hate to re-state, but I agree with Fortuna. What gets me though is how Riim said she "never had a stomach for traveling", why not, what is traveling ...