BlackMirror

Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Moonfield (Chapter 1)
I think clograbby just summed it up so if you follow what she says i don't think you'll have a problem with the rest of your story. Oh, and welcome.
Jul 10, 2008
Short Story » General, General Re: Once Upon a Time
Very strange, but I'm curious as to where you will go with the rest of the story.
Jul 10, 2008

Anger is an acid that can do more harm to the vessel in which it is stored than to anything on which it is poured.
— Mark Twain