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Re: Moonfield (Chapter 1)
I think clograbby just summed it up so if you follow what she says i don't think you'll have a problem with the rest of your story. Oh, and welcome.
Jul 10, 2008 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows
o.k. I have to be brutally honest. I couldn't stand your piece. It felt like a soap opera or page from a diary. It wasn't the writing, you're a great ...
Jul 10, 2008 -
Re: Once Upon a Time
Very strange, but I'm curious as to where you will go with the rest of the story.
Jul 10, 2008 -
Re: Chapter One - Please Don't Rest Tonight
Nice work. A bit strange, well a lot strange, but still interesting, especially the names of the characters. It seems like you know what you're doing, but remember to pay ...
Jul 10, 2008 -
Re: Evil is a Matter of Shoes
This is just a quick post but i really liked your story and i don't usually like fantasy stories but remember to keep the opening of your story simple and ...
Jul 5, 2008 -
Re: Sine Nonime (fancy latin for it doesn't have one) 1.0
Gag me with a spoon! I enjoyed your the p.o.v you used but to be brutally honest I couldn't stand your story. Your intro was pretty good, but after reading ...
Jun 28, 2008 -
Re: Hey
Hey, how's it going. I just wanted to say hello to everybody.
Jun 11, 2008