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BlackDiamond139

  • Short Story » General, Science Fiction Re: XIII

    I love how this is dark and powerful, opening with how the person feels as though they're drowning. I love the imagery, the way that your writing has a certain ...

    Aug 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Memories Past

    I love the feelings reflected in this. You show how hard it is to let go of a past love who's hurt you. It sort of displays the agony and ...

    Aug 27, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Collisions

    I enjoy how you begin as sort of whimsical and joyful and manage to change the entire feeling of it. It begins as something nice and cheerful and random, then ...

    Aug 9, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Steps into the Mirror - 00

    This is amazing. I love the way that you write. It's haunting and grips you. Your style of writing somewhat makes it so that you can't look away from the ...

    Aug 9, 2015


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