Bivrax

I thought... That this was amazing. I don't know why though. It just appealed to me, in an unusual way.

Here, let out your random thoughts, or whatever. It's more for saying random stuff. "Enjoy."

He walked into the dry, aged house, and for some reason he had no clue why he was there. The cracked wooden floors were coated with a dust unlike any ...

1/10. I hate that song. "From the window, to the wall, to the sweat drops of my balls." Sorry, I don't know the name of the song.

Oh, thanks.

Oh, yeah, uhm, I don't know how to review, how do I?

I am actually more of a novel type/short story writer. It just comes more natural to me. I'm actually working on a "short" story to put on here, called The ...

Luci, why did you feel the need to quote all of that? Um, sorry. I do think the story was pretty good.

Thanks for the welcome! I actually can tell I'm gonna like it here, because it's 100% percent writing, basically. I've been searching for a writing forum for about month now, ...

I think it was pretty good. And yes, paragraph spacing would help.

I agree. I think that a bit less details, and you'll be good to go. Sometimes if you have too much details, the reader can forget what they're actually reading ...

Make a story by posting one word at a time. Make sure it makes sense, though! I'll start things off: There

Hope you like it here.

Thanks, I never thought of that.

Hey, I'm new. I'll just tell you a few things about myself to get started. •My favorite band is Led Zeppelin •I play the trumpet •My favorite author is Stephen ...