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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Whispering tower

    The sun sat drooping slightly over the arid landscape. The earth was hard and sparsely vegetated; the imprint of hundreds of running feet from over the years was prominent. The ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Behind The Cloud Of Dreams

    Behind the cloud of dreams. There’s a smiling face. And on her moon like face, are streams of black silk flowing down her rosy cheeks. Behind the cloud of dreams. ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    Hi, I'm Autumn and I came from StoryWrite.com. There was too much drama over there so I decided to look somewhere else to publish my work. I already published a ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Writers Corner Re: What Inspires you?

    I'm usually inspired from random things. If I see something, any random thing, I might get some crazy idea for a story, that turns into something great.

    Apr 12, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: God the Dealer

    Yeah, sometimes I will write in a not-me style.

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: #@!!$%#*!@* (Bleep)

    Sorry, but I very much disliked this. I didn't get the point. I only got violence stuck in my head. It's also is some way depressing to me.

    Apr 12, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Grandfather Clock

    Thanks for the review. I don't know why, but when I write what I think, this is what comes out. Usually, anyway, I end up with some kind of warped, ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Discovery

    It's definitely touching in a way I guess. But, you could add more description, length, and overall topic. It is, very short for a short story, and this is a ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: My Aborted Child

    Amazing, also moving. I loved it. It was all-out beautiful. Everything was so simple, it hooked me. I read it in just over a minute, I'm guessing. You did a ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Annoying

    I liked it. Very simple. Easy to follow. Just what I'm looking for. I can tell you didn't try and be all fancy. You just wrote how you felt. Even ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Pizza

    Part of why I liked this, is because I love pizza. I also liked it because it is very simple (in my mind, at least) and is very easy to ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Pizza

    Part of why I liked this, is because I love pizza. I also liked it because it is very simple (in my mind, at least) and is very easy to ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Castle Scene

    I think it was pretty good. It had some nice descriptions, that gave it a calm feel to it... besides the corpses floating down stream.

    Apr 12, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: God the Dealer

    Personally, it wasn't my favorite. It's not really my favorite topic. Plus, the grammar, or what ever you want to call it, is sorta, well, messy. PinkShearwater pointed out some ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Idea Bank

    Looking for a good idea for a character, plot, or setting? Get some from here! Or, to give writers who are struggling to come up with an idea, submit yours ...

    Apr 12, 2011


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