Bivrax

"I love you mom," says a frazzled young Carrie crawling into her bedsheets. I walk over to my daughters bed with the biggest smile I can manage upon my face. ...

Silence Fills my room. Confusion You must assume. Regret Reminds me of the past. Doubt That this won’t last. Haunt Is what it is. Forget Is what it needs. My ...

Thank you so much! I actually don't write that much, if you can believe me. I'm only pretty good because the stories are always in my mind, but it's hard ...

Thanks! I can see where you pointed out I can improve, and I agree. I also expected all those grammar issues. Thanks for the review, again!

The first strike knocks me down. I choke, tasting blood as it froths in my mouth-- even the clouds blur together, shuddering as another blow comes and rattles my bones; ...

No problem! I really liked it, actually. Probably one of the best stories I've read on here since I joined a few days ago. I can't wait to read more ...

“Mama, wake up.” Jasmine peered over the handle bars keeping her mama safely tucked in bed. She couldn’t see her Mama’s face good so she pulled the chair to the ...

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I totally think he lost it. I think he got a face lift or something...

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Definitely helpful. Thanks.

Good one.

The shortest lifespan Is not that of the Fly; It's the Second Who must live so briefly. Flash by for a moment (Even shorter, I mean) An instant (perhaps) Stepping ...

Hey, this is my first major story on here. I worked super hard! Please review it! Thanks!