Bittersweet

Hiya Michael! Overall, nice poem! You kept to mood of the poem very consistent and it was easy to see how the narrator feels. I have some nitpicks first, though, ...

Kylanesque: adj. describes a very creative, original, and sometimes lengthy simile or metaphor that no one else would probably have ever thought up. Dude, Connie's YWS fanfic was totally Kylanesque, ...

Hiya, Spike! Few things I noticed; one, you don't have to capitalize the beginning of every line, which I think you know, but I found one or two that were ...

I really admire your style of writing. A lot. This story was very interesting and witty. I loved how some parts made me actually laugh out loud, but I still ...

L. O. L. I love you, Teague. :P I don't think anyone else would've posted a song about NaNoWriMo here 'cept you. Because deep isn't your style, right? Heh. -Holly ...

Katrina! I have a present for youuuu! A review! Happy Christmas. :P "I am going to go for a walk," Is what Marie told her parents Lowercase I on "is". ...

Ah. The ending was lovely. Walking down the cold street towards an empty wooden bench overlooking a cold, seemingly lifeless lake, and without the ferryman Charon to lead the way, ...

Man, dude. You've got like... amazing talent. No joke. I loved every minute. I must admit, it's a bit refreshing hearing something like this from a guy's point of view ...

Hey! Here's that review I promised. And I read the first chapter too so I understood what was going on here. of a second, Her grinning face Her = her ...

Hey! Here's that review I promised you! I hope it is of help, though most has probably already been said. This is very lovely. The imagery is great; there is ...

Okay, this isn't going to be a huge review because I just reviewed your other chapter, but oh my gosh! I seriously wasn't expecting that. I mean, sort of, but ...

Oh my... Leo is indeed a dreamboat... :P I looked at my caller id before I answered; it was Jordan. You might want to capitalize 'id' because when I read ...

Eep! As I said already, this is very morbid. Insanely. But I shall get more into that later as always, yes? “Swear to me!” she moaned, and I nodded. Because ...

Ah poo. This review won't be very good. But I shall help as much as I can! As mentioned, this isn't the type of thing that has been read over ...

Hiya, Sombrero Sadie! (I think that name might stick. Sorry xD) Somewhere in the barren wasteland of New Mexico, a man strolled quietly through a deserted road; hands in his ...