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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Tying the Knot

    I totally agree with Alexis*the*person. I thought you were talking about marriage. I was confused until the very last line. But I feel it really doesn't go deep. I don't ...

    May 22, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A Clean Bite--Prologue

    It's very Twilightesque. That's not always a bad thing, but I think that it's a bit over-the-top Twilight-like. I feel like the characters aren't original. I feel like the whole ...

    May 22, 2008
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: All The Scars That Spell Out Your Name...

    It is a very powerful poem. I like the stanza that talks about the bird and the plane. Because it is a saying that everyone knows, it makes it very ...

    May 21, 2008


so many languages have fallen / off of the edge of the world / into the dragon's mouth.
— Lucille Clifton