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Re: Tying the Knot
I totally agree with Alexis*the*person. I thought you were talking about marriage. I was confused until the very last line. But I feel it really doesn't go deep. I don't ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: A Clean Bite--Prologue
It's very Twilightesque. That's not always a bad thing, but I think that it's a bit over-the-top Twilight-like. I feel like the characters aren't original. I feel like the whole ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: All The Scars That Spell Out Your Name...
It is a very powerful poem. I like the stanza that talks about the bird and the plane. Because it is a saying that everyone knows, it makes it very ...
May 21, 2008
