Bishop

I can tell where the story is going, the detective will probably become the hunted, but thats just what makes it action/adventure. You did keep me hooked, on a stable ...

^^ Thats your curiosity, some answers do not come until you keep reading on, sorry I haven't been here, I will get on it after I am out of school.

You did keep me a bit confused as to why you kept giving us weird analogies to peice up certain spots of your chapter one, but it wasn't like I ...

Well it really did take me a while to get through it, but it wasn't like I wasn't truly hooked onto it after I got a little further down. I ...

Sorry about that haha, I wrote this right off the top of my dome. I do not have to steal people's stories to get an idea down, so I do ...

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- //. Prologue The gates of hell sure didn't seem as scary as I thought it would. The ScapeGoat's head sitting right in t

Don't know where to start, its a new type of forum im used to going to, but maybe you guys will make me feel a bit more comfortable. I like ...