BirthdayPirate

Ahoy BirthdayPirate, Stick to pillaging ships until you can coherently piece together your thoughts. Best, Brad Dude, go read a renga. Perhaps this one . It's far superior to mine, ...

The rhyming seemed a little strained at points, although it isn't entirely noticeable on the first read. Looking back on it, all three stanzas could be improved if the rhyming ...

I'm not trying to say anything, really. It's a renga; the whole point is to connect several little slices of life, with the focus on the connections. I'm glad you ...

A decent first attempt, but there were a few bumps that should probably be smoothed out. First of all, try not to explain the meaning of a poem to your ...

Just a very short solo renga I wrote on a long car ride. Not a "real" renga, and not the best poem in its own right, but I like it ...