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Re: No Heartbeat Detections
Well, I am not at all a poetry person. But as a reader of poetry. This what I have to say: Deaths not one can foresee. But happen even if ...
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Re: Illusion of Evolution
Well, Evolution's not my favorite topic, if taken in a literal scientific manner. But as for what I could understand from your writing is that you also hinted towards the ...
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Re: Burning Thoughts
And I wanted to LIKE your poem not my comment, that really happened accidentally. :P
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Burning Thoughts
Well, I can't comment on structure as I don't hold any expertise when it comes to poetry in any language. But what I can tell you is, how I felt ...
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Re: Free, One Hundred Percent.
Well, I am really flattered. As I know, I couldn't write as well as all these people around here do and am not being humble at all. But thanks. :)
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Re: Free, One Hundred Percent.
Life and Death. One, an experience enriching you with joy and pain, other relieving you from all. But the choice is not yours to make. In neither cases. Yes, it ...
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: Cruelty thy name is......
Its 7:33 a.m on the dial and everyone is still asleep. Keeping in mind the psychological alterations with which one usually suffers while spending vacations always result in late rising, ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: Change
Murtuza, these lines, are very simple yet very powerful. My kind of poetry. :) Its uplifting. Its sensible. It portrays a person who had lost his valour and hope and ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: Desperation
DISCLAIMER: I am not at all a poet. And I am completely unfamiliar with the form and all as well. Infact, English poetry is something that I have always found ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: You Should Know....
StarryWolf and Wtbh: Thanks both of you. :) This is not creativity. This is experience. This is the truth. Trust me, try it yourself. BTW, thanks again for the amazing ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: You Should Know....
When your sky gets more crowded with the darker clouds that even occlude the moonlight, when all you see is darkness and all you feel is demented, when nothing your ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Honeydew Hollow
Haya Ahmed-- a medical student from Egypt.
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Begin!
I am glad you understood the main idea behind this. The style and form, I know is not at all perfect. I need to learn that. But yes, it's delighting ...
Oct 16, 2011
