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Re: Shift (Chapter 1)
The other people got most of it, but there's one thing I'd like to add: On the outside, I looked like a perfectly normal human, but on the inside…well, that’s ...
Dec 28, 2009 -
Re: Save you
That was beautiful. I definitely thought of abortion when I read it, although what the others said could also hold true. Overall, you did a good job with the flow, ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: All Mine 1.2
Excuse me if this isn't too good, since this is my first review. This definitely has potential. I love how the humans actually want to have their blood sucked, rather ...
Jun 22, 2009
