BigBadBear

Hey, Sumi! I'm hungry for a great story, and of course, if it's written by you, I know it must be fantastic. Now... I'm a little worried. I haven't read ...

Hey, Kylan! I saw that you posted #4 so I figured I better read this one first. I must admit that this is my favorite chapter so far, for the ...

Okay. I hate to be the one that echoes everyone above me, but they're right. Nothing has happened. Nothing that's sparked my interest so far. And this is critical, Kylan. ...

Hey, Connie! I read through Jig's comments before I read the chapter, so I'm expecting something brilliant. :D O.O That was probably the best chapter I've ever read by you. ...

The rumbling sounded again, louder this time. Whatever was making the noise, it was getting closer. It sounded big too. Creep holstered his pistol and took the Thompson off [s]of[/s] ...

It could have been a very good party. That fact could not be disputed. All [s]of[/s] the aristocrat families in the City had been invited to it, and most of ...

Hey, Kylan! I'm glad you finally posted this! I've been waiting eagerly all week. Railroad tracks run through it. I agree with Angel. This doesn't fit and ruins the whole ...

Hey, Pork! This looks really interesting, so let's dive into it. 1: Well, that was a... shocking story. I was expecting some humorous ending, but instead, I got this, and ...

*cracks up* Jeez, do I really sound like that? -Kylan Yes, yes, you really do! And that part about me. Jeez. Holy freak. That had me ROFLing. Seriously. I do ...

Haha. That's a really gross, but nice poem. I like the image and metaphor you're trying to convey, and I think it works out nicely. Correct me if I'm wrong: ...

I'm here! And I can't wait to finish it! Wow. Kylan. Just wow. I'm breathless right now. I'm so mad that it's over now. I was looking forward to be ...

Alright! I'm here again. Crap, crap crap! Kylan, I didn't find anything. This was a freaking lame critique. Will it be okay if I just leave this one? There was ...

Hey, Kylan! Again, my sincere apologies for not getting to this any sooner. Right now, I'm at a lame part of TNH, so I'm going to use this time to ...

Haha, I did read this, I just forgot to critique? So sorry! >.< The words he's saying are robust and loud like a southern baptist choir beltin' out songs of ...

Kylan, Wonderful, as always. I only caught a few little things in the line-by-line attachment below. Nothing major; just some sentences that were all screwed up and stuff. I’m really ...