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Thanks for all the helpful reviews; I'm glad I'm not boring anyone to death or anything. >_> I've decided to use one thread for each chapter; it'll be less messy ...

Awww, I can't believe you remember me. :oops: I mean, I was here only for such a brief time... Looking forward to the review. Take all the time you need, ...

This is definitely better, description-wise; I've got a concrete vision of what the house looks like (and it sounds lovely...plus I love the little details you put in, like "Spanish ...

Yeah, I can see what you were intending for Larara, but even if she's supposed to be a bit of a bitch, she at least should start off somewhat sympathetic, ...

This has definitely piqued my interest but seeing as I'm in full finals mode for school I can't get to this until school is over (Thursday). Sorry to make you ...

Ack, please ignore this there a way to delete posts? >_> Because this is a total mistake...it's not meant to be here. *feels like an idiot*

Please note that the issue isn't just about shooting or whatever; it's about having to explain a point in your story in a follow-up post. I've done it before in ...

It's a good thing that you clarified the point...but the entire point of my post was that the clarification should be in the story itself, not in a follow-up post. ...

Naa, your lateness is perfectly acceptable since I haven't been on this site for quite some time as well. I just got...busy...and...stuff...happened. So yeah. Also, I'm not currently continuing these ...

Er, I'm feeling a little pathetic about not getting reviews... *ducks and hides*

Wow, glad you liked it (though I'm sure there's something to critique...). I'm surprised you liked Dora, though, because I kind of found her...hard to write. At least harder to ...

The FIFA thing is called "soccer" in the US. "Tackle football" is, um...lots of padding and helmets? And the Super Bowl? XD I'm at a loss to explain this... But ...

Thanks so much for the review. ~_^ It makes my day when people take the time to read my stuff and then comment on it! Wow...how did I make a ...

*avoiding working on a physics practicum write-up la la la what is physics?* Thanks for the review--and I'm really glad at how nitpicky it is. ^^ I need more of ...

Really? Funny how I never noticed stuff like that before. O_o I'm going to have to find a professionally copy-edited book and see... But I'm slow on these things. I ...