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The End of Time Chapter One
This is the novel project I'm working on, and currently it's going well, although as it is I've planned...a whole thirty-six...chapters for the thing. That can't be right. I feel ...
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The End of Time Chapter Two (Part A)
This chapter introduces the science fiction aspect of the story. Anyway, I'm incredibly displeased with the first part of the chapter. Actually, the first three quarters at least until Darian ...
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The End of Time Chapter Two (Part B)
Please check out chapter two part A first if you haven't...it's seriously in need of reviews. Like I said before, if you make it through the entire chapter I'll happily ...
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The End of Time Chapter Three (Part A)
This marks Tey's part of the narrative, and is the longest chapter yet, so I will be posting it in three parts. Chapter two part B needs more reviews, so ...
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The End of Time Chapter Three (Part B)
Here's part 2 of 3 for chapter three. I promise there won't be another monster of a chapter like this for a while (in fact...not until sixteen, I'd have to ...
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The End of Time Chapter Three (Part C)
With this part, the monster of a chapter is finally over. There won't be another chapter like this until sixteen, so breathe easy, everyone! Again, this picks up directly after ...
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The End of Time Chapter Four (Part A)
Well, after a long break, I figure I should get another chapter up ASAP. So here's chapter four, which reprises Nendo. I'm a bit embarrassed about this chapter, and I ...
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The End of Time Chapter Four (Part B)
I haven't got much to say on this part, actually, except that we get some insight on Cura's character and it's a bit more exciting. Do look at Part A ...
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The End of Time Chapter Five (Part A)
This is one of my favorite chapters, probably because it has the most Lord Darian in it so far. There's also some explanation of the magic system (about time). The ...
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The End of Time Chapter Five (Part B)
...no, this story does not have Gurren Lagann references in it. Why do you ask? (Idach doesn't even show up in this chapter...) Anyway, this is my favorite scene so ...
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The End of Time Chapter Six (Part A)
Here's chapter six, which has some minor continuity errors (mostly regarding the terms Founders/guardians) which I'm unsure how to fix. There's more worldbuilding in this chapter than any of the ...
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The End of Time Chapter Six (Part B)
All right, I don't know if it's fail so much as nervousness over writing a properly mysterious scene...but we shall see. The first part (that is, the conversation between Nendo ...
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The End of Time Chapter Seven (Part A)
This is the scene I was terrified of posting...because it contains this story's first real fight scene. And it's...well...we'll see. *ducks and covers* The End of Time Part One: The ...
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The End of Time Chapter Seven (Part B)
School has started for me, but I have the entire novel written, so should be able to continue posting it regularly. The second part of chapter seven reprises Luanna (after ...
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The End of Time Chapter Eight
You've looked correctly--there are no parts to this one, because it's the first chapter short enough to fit into one topic. Yay.This is my favorite chapter so far, but even ...
