Beware

parrots

There's just too many! I won't choose. You can't make me. *glare* :)

Well I'm from the UK. To be more specific - Cornwall (that's the pointy bit in the south west). To bring up the old discussion that was going on I ...

I like the shortness of the words because they give great rhythm which I think is important in poetry. I feel that the first 'but' in the third satnza could ...

I think it could have been shorter with just the more essential parts so that the rhyming would seem less forced. But then again I really like the way the ...

Ok, so maybe it's a little self centred, but all people are selfish. Some are just more honest about it than others. There's a lot of emotion in this piece ...

I agree that the first stanza could do with an 'I' to start it off and I do personally prefer it when each line begins with a capital letter, but ...

Thanks for the advice everyone. Hope it helps me improve my writing.

Well, the time passed a little bit too fast for my liking. I guess I like to linger in the moment... but on the whole I think it's a really ...

I really like the rhythm of the poem. It's well written and the words used are interesting too. :)

Thanks guys. Very encouraging. :)

My last poem wasn't greatly received, so here goes. Take away my freedom Lock me in a box Keep me against my will With a thousand locks Do you even ...

I really like the first part of the poem, but after that it did start to go downhill a bit. The feeling of defiance in the second verse/stanza is great ...

Uh, kind of a depressing poem, was trying something new... Alone again in so much pain Wondering why I have to cry And take all of this strain Lying hurt ...

Hello. Yeah, so I came here from and don't really know what's going on or what I'm doing. But it's really nice here so I'm gonna take a look around. ...