BetsyJ

Hi, Thank you for your review:)) You've said some stanzas felt prejudiced...can you please elaborate on that? I would say that I'm, perhaps, biased to the colour, but "prejudice" connotes ...

Hmm. I understand. Perhaps you mean this piece is more recollective, with the narrator having a long internal monologue. I agree that most of the action is in the past, ...

Dear Mailice, Thank you for your review. The verb in the sentence you have mentioned is clearly "brims". What i mean by it, if it is not already clear, is ...

Thank a lot for your review!

Thank you for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem!

no problem at all!! Apologies if my previous reply sounded like I was offended! I just meant to clarify. :) :)

Thanks a lot for your review! I am glad you enjoyed the read. :)

Sure. It's actually taken from something real that happened. And if I had said that I had found it funny when this was being told to me, it would have ...

Hi, Thank you for the welcome, and your review. I'll begin by answering your last question. This piece was my first post here on YWS...and when I was in the ...

Hi Harry, Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad you read the whole piece (parts 1 and 2) and so you got the idea of the piece. This ...

Hi Watcha! Thank you for the detailed review. Glad you enjoyed the poem. I will definitely take your points and consider them. Yes, the poem is structured with stanzas but ...

Thank you for your review! Glad you enjoyed the poem.

Thank you! I'm thrilled you enjoyed the poem.

Thank you for your views. I am really glad you enjoyed reading it.

Excuse the typo *in after setting in my previous reply. Also, regarding the quotation marks, yes, I'm aware they've been left out. It was deliberate, but I see your point. ...