BethJeff

Thanks that's been really helpful. I think I will go through and break up my paragraphs a bit because a few people have said that now. I will also make ...

yes yes I know I'm terrible with grammar and spellings :L I'll go through and check that. And whoo I remembered to use paragraphs, lol Cool thanks Keeya ~Beth ;D ...

Thanks, that's been really helpful. I know I am terrible with grammar and punctuation so I do really need to watch for that! I will go through and change those ...

Hey, Just wanted to say that you have a very interesting plot so far and it would be interesting to see where you take it. Normally I'm not a big ...