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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Letter to the World

    It almost sounds like a set of lyrics, but I guess that means it's flowing off the tongue, which can only be a good thing. I think maybe your second ...

    Apr 29, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: nothing can stop me

    Agreed with the above statement, although I am well aware that this is a set of lyrics, not poetry; and lyrics shouldn't be written aimlessly. There has to be a ...

    Apr 29, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Stalker Syndrome

    Hey there. In general, I liked this because it was different, It wasn't just another song regarding someone's love for a member for the opposite sex, but rather lust, and ...

    Apr 26, 2011


More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes