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Re: Intimation [2]
Wait, did they kill her?
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: Narrative Essay, Untitled.
I don’t even know why I’m doing this, I think to myself. I hate blood, I despise needles, and oh my, a pint is pretty big. I curse myself over ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: Fiction
I wrote this at a writing workshop at Alfred University. We had to start with "I am", and end with "Little did I know." The English Professor who critiqued it ...
Jul 8, 2009 -
Re: What don't you like about vampire stories?
It's not that I don't like Vampire stories, I just don't like that is is so cliche. You can't deny that after Twilight, almost everybody had stories of a male ...
Jul 8, 2009 -
Re: Another Sunset. Prologue.
I loved it. It was amazing. While reading it, I felt like Dakota....dancing with Lucas. However, Lin910 is right. There are alot of akward sentences in here. For example: "He ...
May 4, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
I'm assuming this is about Hamas? Very good. Nice emotion, but I think you could have really emphasized the fear factor. When I say 'What is the Hamas?", I'm talking ...
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
A/N: I had a word limit on this. It's supposed to be a short essay for school, dramatically reflecting a real, recent, horrifying event. (I totally know how to make ...
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
Hey June, I haven't talked to you in like forever. I liked this peice alot. I didn't find anything wrong with it---keep writing. I felt scared every second I was ...
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
Authors Note: Hey guys. So you won't be confused, I work at a McDonalds Restaurant in Elmira, New York. Although Elmira is small, we get thousands of customers a day! ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: The trap of the street
I must stop writing now, because my tears are blocking my vision. I wish I had never gone down the path my mother silently warned me about, but I did. ...
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: Kiss of an Enemy
Emma's Diary 8/16/2007 Have you ever wondered what it's like to kiss your enemy? To kiss the person you have loathed all your life? I did. I have always thought ...
Dec 25, 2008 -
Re: Twilight Fan Fiction
Edward smiled and put his arm around my waist. Even with all of the lights turned off and the curtains closed, I saw his beautiful face. I blinked and smiled ...
Aug 9, 2008 -
Re: Twilight Fan Fiction
READERS: Imagine Bella and Edward sitting on a couch in a cozy room. Bella is sitting on his lap facing him. There’s nobody in the room except them. It’s very, ...
Aug 9, 2008
