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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Intimation [2]

    Wait, did they kill her?

    Jan 14, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Narrative Essay, Untitled.

    I don’t even know why I’m doing this, I think to myself. I hate blood, I despise needles, and oh my, a pint is pretty big. I curse myself over ...

    Jan 7, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Fiction

    I wrote this at a writing workshop at Alfred University. We had to start with "I am", and end with "Little did I know." The English Professor who critiqued it ...

    Jul 8, 2009
  • Research Re: What don't you like about vampire stories?

    It's not that I don't like Vampire stories, I just don't like that is is so cliche. You can't deny that after Twilight, almost everybody had stories of a male ...

    Jul 8, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Another Sunset. Prologue.

    I loved it. It was amazing. While reading it, I felt like Dakota....dancing with Lucas. However, Lin910 is right. There are alot of akward sentences in here. For example: "He ...

    May 4, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Untitled

    I'm assuming this is about Hamas? Very good. Nice emotion, but I think you could have really emphasized the fear factor. When I say 'What is the Hamas?", I'm talking ...

    Feb 6, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Untitled

    A/N: I had a word limit on this. It's supposed to be a short essay for school, dramatically reflecting a real, recent, horrifying event. (I totally know how to make ...

    Feb 6, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Untitled

    Hey June, I haven't talked to you in like forever. I liked this peice alot. I didn't find anything wrong with it---keep writing. I felt scared every second I was ...

    Feb 6, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Untitled

    Authors Note: Hey guys. So you won't be confused, I work at a McDonalds Restaurant in Elmira, New York. Although Elmira is small, we get thousands of customers a day! ...

    Dec 30, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The trap of the street

    I must stop writing now, because my tears are blocking my vision. I wish I had never gone down the path my mother silently warned me about, but I did. ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Kiss of an Enemy

    Emma's Diary 8/16/2007 Have you ever wondered what it's like to kiss your enemy? To kiss the person you have loathed all your life? I did. I have always thought ...

    Dec 25, 2008
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Twilight Fan Fiction

    Edward smiled and put his arm around my waist. Even with all of the lights turned off and the curtains closed, I saw his beautiful face. I blinked and smiled ...

    Aug 9, 2008
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Twilight Fan Fiction

    READERS: Imagine Bella and Edward sitting on a couch in a cozy room. Bella is sitting on his lap facing him. There’s nobody in the room except them. It’s very, ...

    Aug 9, 2008


My humanity is bound up in yours, for we can only be human together.
— Bishop Desmond Tutu